Sure, I don’t mind reviewing your crappy essay.

My essay grade is comprised of 1) my essay and 2) reviewing and revising 2 other people’s essays. I had to fill out this peer review form for this student’s essay and the last prompt was to say something nice. I did. 

There was NOTHING nice to say about it. My roommate and I literally tore this person’s paper apart among reviewing it. Jacob even read the paper on the toilet because he said it was s***. hehe…

The student’s paper was about war and individualism. Here’s one of the sentences: “Music has remained one of the most irrefutable mediums of expression over time and can unite people, despite a great amount of disagreements.” What?! Music? I thought this was about war and individualism! Maybe I’m being a little harsh.